This is awesome so far, keep it up! :D - The Fossy has spoken. Call me, beep me, if you wanna reach me. 00:59, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks! :) I dunno what to do next though. :P And I need help with a detail in TBOTE...
So...what do you like about this so far? Anything I should add or change?
--Goth What makes you stop and smell the roses in an open field? 01:01, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
Not sure if you're gonna like it but I have a suggestion. You should write about Ferb's funeruel. I mean show Ferb's reaction when Phineas and Jessie were talking.76.164.117.38 21:30, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
Attending your own funeral...creepy... - The Fossy has spoken. Call me, beep me, if you wanna reach me. 04:48, August 4, 2011 (UTC)
He's a ghost. 'Sides, shouldn't Ferb find out about Phin?Phinabella Rules! 02:23, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
I think I will use it. Thank you!
How dare you bring light into my lair! YOU MUST DIE! 16:26, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
When are you gonna keep working on this? I really want to read more of it. - The Fossy has spoken. Call me, beep me, if you wanna reach me. 19:12, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
[shrugs] If I have time and if I can get out of writer's block, I will try to work on it. Do you have any suggestions?
And now for the weather. THERE'S ROBOTS, PHIL, ROBOTS! AHHHHHHHHHHH! 19:18, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
Have phantom Ferb sit next to Phin at Ferb's funeral, wishing he could comfort him. - The Fossy has spoken. Call me, beep me, if you wanna reach me. 00:20, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
Okay, thanks!
And now for the weather. THERE'S ROBOTS, PHIL, ROBOTS! AHHHHHHHHHHH! 00:21, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
In this story, ghosts don't have the ability to cry. And Ferb is so depressed now. Does it build up inside him, or can he let it out in another way?
And now for the weather. THERE'S ROBOTS, PHIL, ROBOTS! AHHHHHHHHHHH! 01:27, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
It would be really hard to let out in another but I normally talk to myself when I'm upset. (I'm an only child and I've got no one else to talk to)Phinabella Rules! 03:08, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
Trust me, I understand. I'm an only child too. I wrote a song to vent just now...
Yikes, this story issue is hard...
And now for the weather. THERE'S ROBOTS, PHIL, ROBOTS! AHHHHHHHHHHH! 03:15, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
I 'talk' to my fanon charas. Maybe have Ferb vent to Ethan? I dunno.....Phinabella Rules! 03:37, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
He probably will.
Maybe ghosts have a different way of "crying"?
And now for the weather. THERE'S ROBOTS, PHIL, ROBOTS! AHHHHHHHHHHH! 03:47, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
I'll consider this but I have a lot to do on fanon.Phinabella Rules! 03:53, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
"I-I don't l-like th-this," Ferb said. "I-I wish I was st-still alive."
...now what? <_<
And now for the weather. THERE'S ROBOTS, PHIL, ROBOTS! AHHHHHHHHHHH! 18:08, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
All I can think of is the funerel scene.Phinabella Rules! 02:25, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
Yeah, Fossy suggested skipping to the funeral. That is what I will do.
And now for the weather. THERE'S ROBOTS, PHIL, ROBOTS! AHHHHHHHHHHH! 02:31, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
I will try to work on this ASAP. Any suggestions for future scenes?
And now for the weather. THERE'S ROBOTS, PHIL, ROBOTS! AHHHHHHHHHHH! 14:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
I'm stuck! D:
--Goth
Ugh![]
I'm still stuck!
--Goth